Here is six-year-old grand daughter Avery’s latest poem:
I Wish For Bunnies
I Wish For Bunnies
I wish for Bunnies
Bunnies and more Bunnies.
they would hop all around
and they would hop so
fast that they lost all there fur, so
they would be naked! When I
wished for the bunnies
they just randumly came out
of the forest. The trouble was that
one day we ran out of carotts
then the bunnies starvd to death
then we had to save up for thousans
of dollars so the Bunnies
would not starv to death. then we
family got a thousen dollars. so then
we bout so much carotts and the days
went by and they did not starv to death
Because they made there Birthday and
there wish was that they never ever
got hungry again and the wish came true
And we lived happicly ever after.
Glad you kept in the spelling errors, etc. Gives it so much character. She loves seeing her work posted. 🙂
Avery touched on everything in this poem – sweet bunnies, nakedness, hunger, money, possible death, birthdays…and a happicly ever after!